Leaving Your Parent's House
The walls you once walked by
Without any notice
scream as if to say
Where are you going?
A new place, that's where
Somewhere I think I know
but know nothing about
But hope to learn, and will
A familiar but unfamiliar place
I know everything, but nothing
about what here is
What I thought I knew
Lonely but not alone
thinking back to those walls
Is this a dream?
The Bridge
How do I know
this walk, the mist, the wind,
the biting cold stinging the skin,
the smell of exhaust and the sound
of engines, the little walking man
the views daring you to stare out,
over the rushing water.
How do I know this place?
Is this a place you recognize?
The Man
He, the one who brought here what we
have.
What we had. What we have.
The buildings still lined along the
water.
They look the same, but do no stand for
the reason they were built
He, the one who traveled, explored,
created, stole
the reason for this city, for its
birth, for its beginning.
Now serve a different purpose
To serve rather than to produce.
Streets lined with cobblestones,
walked by people who did not see them
paved.
A different place, in the same
location.
New people, new culture, new
everything.
Except for the buildings
The roads
The bridges
The water
The water that gave this city life.
The real power of Lowell.
The reason we are all here,
thanks to it, thanks to Him.
The three pieces I wrote about for the
Common creative assignment were each based on individual pieces in
either issue 1 or 7 in The Common.
The first piece was based on the piece
titled Your Parent's House by
Ziena Hashem Beck. My poem, titled Leaving Your Parent's
House is a continuation of
Beck's work. In Beck's poem, the reader is taken through the typical
house that he/she may have grown up in. The simple things like the
walls are highlighted, while also the people and the same old rote
conversations that happen over and over in an old home are talked
about as well. In my piece, I take the reader to a new place, ripping
him/her from their comfort of home at his/her parents house to
somewhere that is completely new. I experienced this, along with
hundreds of thousands of college freshman do every year. I aimed to
relate to the alienation that one may feel when they enter a
completely new place, and while they are surrounded by people at
almost all times, it is still very easy to feel lonely. Perhaps after
reading this, they may not feel so alone.
My
second piece is based on the piece titled Little Chapel by
Richie Hofmann. This piece recalls a place where the narrator
suggests he/she knows the place being described, but does not know
exactly how, and also inquires about whether or not any readers also
find this place familiar. In my piece titled The Bridge I
tried to do something similar. I tried to describe a place that I
know very well, the Bridge that stands between East and North campus
here at Umass Lowell. A place that many of us here know, and to the
last question of “Is this a place you recognize?”
hopefully, many of my fellow
students would reply with a yes, as they too know this place. The
interesting thing about it though, its that their observations and
memories about it may be vastly different than my own.
The
third piece I wrote is based on a piece of the same title in the
first issue of The Common, by
Cliff Forshaw. In Forshaw's work, he speaks of a man, in this
situation, a Governor, who has created prisons, and chapels. Within
the walls of these institutions so much goes on, more than what the
actual walls themselves could have done, showing that in most cases,
it is what happens there that gives a place its meaning, not the
place itself. Here in Lowell, that man is the namesake of the city,
Francis Cabot Lowell. He is the one that created, or perhaps stole,
the idea for a machine that would transform the city forever. The
machine loom was the reason for the building of all of the mill
buildings that define the city of Lowell's skyline. It was this man,
and the river that runs through the city, that gave Lowell the power
to become such a revolutionary city. Centuries later however, Lowell
is a different place, with entirely different people and culture, but
no matter what is here, the mills will always be a reminder of what
this city was founded on.
